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What the hell does your first sentence even say? It's just a bunch of flowery words thrown together in an unintelligible jumble. If I substitute your buzz words for their meanings your sentence pretty much says this: Creativity is an unrestrained expression of words or feelings of that which exists within made to readily perceived by the senses. WTF? I didn't even read the rest. Try saying something that makes sense instead of just shoving as many buzz words as possible into every sentence.